The English Department, I.E.S. Diego Angulo (Elin von Munthe)

Suggestions from IES Diego Angulo for the fifth paragraph:

Choose a) , b), or c)

a) Lola Menta was waiting for him. She wanted to say that she was sorry. After two days, the doctor found a new leg for Johnny and stuck it to his body. Johnny and Lola Menta arrived to Spain when he was 18 years old and they went to see his parents at Raboconejo. Here they decided .......

b) Lola Menta arrived to the hospital. She had two surprises. The first was that she wanted to return with him!!! The other surprise was that ......she had found his left leg!!! The doctor said that he had to sew the leg and Johnny was very afraid. The day of the operation .......

c) .... and the doctor gave him a new leg. He became happy. The next day, his girlfriend went to see him and she asked him to forgive her, but she had to say one thing: she was pregnant. Now he was sorry!

Suggestions from IES Diego Angulo for the third paragraph:

Choose a) , b) or c)

a) There Johnny met the beutiful Brazilian Lola Menta. One day during the trip they decided to go surfing, but they didn’t know what was going to happen. While he was bathing, Jonny was attacked by a white shark of six metres which then disappeared under the water with Johnny. After a few seconds, a great red spot in the water was seen and Lola Menta was crying. But Johnny .....

b) There Johnny met a girl who showed him the interesting places, the beach, their customs. They were enjoying themselves together and the girl fell in love with Johnny. Then, two deays later, Johnny had an accident ......

c) There Johnny enjoyed the beach, the hotel, the activities in the Amazonas jungle, etc. But one day a bus arrived to the hotel, and it was bringing hos old friends from Raboconejo. He was very surprised, but he didn’t want to meet them again because they were very bad with him when he lived at Raboconejo. He didn’t want to be their friend because everybody said he was a bad boy.

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The beginning of the story:

Johnny was a naughty boy who wanted to know new and different things. He was 15 years old and he lived at Raboconejo, a tiny village in the south of Spain.

Drafts for the first paragraph: (Choose one!)

a) He hadn’t any friends in the village because people thought that he was bad and everybody was afraid of him. One day, he took his bag with food and fizzy drinks, got on his bike and rode away to look for new experiences. He was pedalling and pedalling along the road until he arrived to a small town called Valverde. ......

b) He was angry because he didn’t like the village, so he went to explore the world. In every country something happened to him. When he arrived to Italy, he visited the Coliseum. There he saw a dark door, he went through that door and ...................

c) But because his parents were separated, he had to live six months with his father. The problem is that his dad was from England, so Johnny had to go there to live and he didn’t speak English well ! Living in London, he didn’t want to go to school. But his father said that if he didn’t go, he would not play computer games any more. Johnny was enraged with his father, so he phoned his mother because he wanted to go back to Raboconejo with his friends. ...........

d) He used to dream. He dreamed about travelling around the world. But he couldn’t travel because he hadn’t got any money. One day Johnny went to a park and he found someone’s bag. He opened the bag. Inside the bag there was a lot of money and a note that said: "You are _____ special ______ please ____ travel _____ from _______ Spain ____to _____". Johnny couldn’t believe it! ......................